© Kamalpreet Singh, 18th December, 2013
You should be satisfied,
As you have been beautified,
With the splendid senses five,
Without which you can’t imagine to thrive.
With Your excellent eyes,
You can see the superb sunrise,
The sweet smile of your lover,
And your charming face in the mirror.
With your eager ears,
You can hear the words so clear,
The romantic rhythm of the song,
And the laughter of your friends along.
With your not-numb nose
You can smell the aroma arose
The fantastic fragrance of the rose
And the stall of the momos
With your tangy tongue
You can taste everything among
The flavor of your favorite ice-cream
And the spicy spaghetti extreme
With your screening skin
You can touch everything here-in
The feel of lover’s kiss
And the bliss you can’t miss…!
There are people without these boons,
Who have to suffer the typhoons.
You are lucky to have them well
Be content and enjoy the spell.
We should thank the almighty for what he has given us
because what he gives is the best for us…
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thank you, bless you!
Thanks for the blessings 😀
stopping in from anthropologyandlove, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the thoughts it conjures up of early love, true love. thanks for sharing 🙂
Thank you for the appreciation 😀
Brilliant! Reading this poem sent me back into the motions and gave me a refreshed sense of thankfulness that I’m one of those blessed, thank you.
Thanks for the appreciation… I hope you enjoyed it and you seem have had the “message” of this rhyme 😀
Very lovely words indeed.
Thanks for the appreciation..!
Thank you for this poem, Kamal, it was a due reminder of better attitudes!
Thanks for your kind words.. 😀
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